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Good Morning Sir!

INT. USS FORGER – JELAL AND RAHN’S QUARTERS – MORNING 

The room is dark, humanoid shapes shuffle and whisper.

ZH’RANNI 
You do it.

CASEY 
No, this Is all you, Darv.

JELAL 
Fine I-

RAHN
Computer, lights.

Lights come up illuminating a compact bedroom with two beds and a pair of futuristic wardrobe style furnishings. The room is tidy, except for a single rumpled Forge shit on the floor, a Bajoran string instrument by the unoccupied bed, and a few tech gizmos on top of one of the wardrobes. CONOM RAHN sits up in the other bed looking bleary eyed at a his roommate JELAL DARVEN in pyjamas and a trio  of intruders, ALEXANDRA CASEY, TAI ZH’RANNI AND MUNCHKIN, CASEY and ZH’RANN are in uniform. 

RAHN 
What in the-

EVERYONE ELSE 
Good morning, sir!

RAHN
What are you guys talking about.

CASEY 
This.

CASEY shoves a PADD into RAHN’S hands

ZH’RANNI 
Don’t you mean this, sir?

CASEY 
(grinning)
Right. 
(To RAHN)
Sorry sir.

RAHN looks to JELAL 

RAHN 
What are they talking about?

MUNCHKIN 
(blurting it out)
You have been promoted. 

RAHN 
Tolivel! 

JELAL grins that his Bajoran lingo has rubbed off on RAHN as he nods to the PADD

JELAL 
It’s true, have a look.

ZH’RANNI 
(smirking)
Have a look, sir.

JELAL laughs and RAHN looks at the PADD in disbelief. 

CASEY 
Tai and Munchkin got the word during night shift, they woke me up so I woke JELAL up and here we are.
(a beat) 
Sir.

RAHN 
Enough with the sir stuff.

EVERYONE ELSE 
Aye, aye lieutenant.

ALL laugh. 

CASEY 
So with your permission sir we’d like to drag you out of bed to the lounge for a celebration breakfast. 

ZH’RANNI 
With mimosas!

MUNCHKIN 
I see you have taught Ensign Zh’Ranni about Terran day drinking customs, Ensign Casey. 

CASEY 
I keep telling you guys I’m a leader. 

JELAL 
Well, lead these other two out of our bedroom and we’ll get changed.

CASEY 
C’mon, we’ll grab a table in the lounge.
(a beat)
Assuming we’re dismissed, sir?

RAHN shakes his head and goes with it saying as he gets out of bed.

RAHN
Proceed Mr. Casey.

ALL chuckle as Casey ushers ZH’RANNI and MUNCHKIN out of the room. 

JELAL grins at his roommate 

JELAL 
Congratulations, Con.

RAHN 
Thanks. It’s been… surprising.

JELAL 
Mind if I hit the shower first?

JELAL looks like he’s about to add sir but RAHN cuts him off.

RAHN 
Go for it.

JELAL 
Thanks.

JELAL snaps to attention briefly before marching out. 

RAHN 
(calling after him)
Jerk!

JELAL leaves and RAHN has a moment alone in the room, he looks at the PADD a moment letting the promotion sink in.

RAHN 
(smiling faintly)
Lieutenant Rahn.

RAHN puts the PADD aside and starts to get out of bed.

FADE OUT

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